Ich mag das Gedicht, nur mit der grafischen Darstellung hatte ich kurz ein Problem.
Aber dann hat sie Sinn gemacht, weil die Anordnung der Verse vermutlich vom Wind etwas durchgewirbelt wurden :-)
Dankeschön!
Warum genau fandest du die „grafische Darstellung“ denn problematisch? Die Verschiebung des Titels und der einzelnen Verse war eigentlich so gedacht; es sollte eine diagonale Symmetrie erreicht werden und damit die Lesart hervorgehoben und so der Kyklos deutlicher gemacht werden. Aber „durch den Wind gewirbelt“ klingt auch gut :)
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Ich mag das Gedicht, nur mit der grafischen Darstellung hatte ich kurz ein Problem.
Aber dann hat sie Sinn gemacht, weil die Anordnung der Verse vermutlich vom Wind etwas durchgewirbelt wurden :-)
Dankeschön!
Warum genau fandest du die „grafische Darstellung“ denn problematisch? Die Verschiebung des Titels und der einzelnen Verse war eigentlich so gedacht; es sollte eine diagonale Symmetrie erreicht werden und damit die Lesart hervorgehoben und so der Kyklos deutlicher gemacht werden. Aber „durch den Wind gewirbelt“ klingt auch gut :)
Es sprechen Frieden und Grösse aus deinen Versen. Die Darstellung finde ich makellos. Ich wüsste nicht, was man da noch verbessern könnte.
Danke, Angelo! Freut mich, dass dir das Gedicht gefällt und du dort solch hehre Werte entdecken kannst
Super schön!
Dankeschön